Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Tell Tale Heart project

This is Phil
   My name is George and I am the owner of this really spooky house in this even spookier neighborhood. I have one other person in this house and it is my butler Phil he is kind of tall has a handle bar mustache and seems to hate this house. "Ok I had a good day Phil now I will lay down for the night." For seven nights I have felt someone watching me but yet I have not seen anyone.

   I try to sleep in a pitch black room so that way no robbers would come here. (creek of the hinges) Who's there I said as I heard something creek in my own room. If there is a person watching me they may want my eye because so many people that I have met say that it is a vulture eye. I stay up for an hour hoping that my intruder would show themselves but they never did. I was really scared and I let out a moan of sheer terror because I did not know when he/she would strike. My fears that I have had all tonight have been because of that slight little noise.

   I thought it was a cricket that had made the noise or a mouse going across the floor because only one other person lives in the house with me and I know he would not kill me. Then suddenly a light little ray hit my left eye, the "vulture eye". The thing that confused me is that the light was no where else on my face so where was the light coming from? Then my heart started racing with all of the thing that went through my mind, could I die soon, will I live, or will I forever live in fear?

   I then heard a loud AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH and that caused me to scream at the top of my lungs and then I saw my pursuer and it was... Phil the person that lives with me. He through the bed over me and i kicked, screamed, and punched but I could not get free and then I died.
                                                                   
                                                                    Epilogue
This is George
This is the house
   At the end after the deed was done the bell rang and it was the police. They had said that a neighbor had heard some screaming and was scared that it had been George that wailed.

   Phil being an excellent liar said that George had been away. He let the police search the house and they found nothing. Phil then all of a sudden heard a small beating noise in his head and thought that it was nothing. Then the noise got louder and he knew that they heard it to and then when they did not say anything he just confessed to doing the deed and turned himself in. 

2 comments:

  1. Love how creative this is, telling it from the point of view of the old man. I just have one question, though.....why did you pick "Phil" as the name of the crazy narrator?

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  2. I just chose a random name plus I kind of think that the name Phil is kind of scary in a way

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